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The day was humid, the sun was still high
While I waited for the gray mini van
Hundreds of colorful cars sped right on by
Finally they came; one red and one with tan
Both were hyper and fuzzy, a boy and a girl
With light brown eyes and noses of dark pink
The red stayed, while up his sister did curl
On a blanket alone; both small as mink
My puppy was brave and showed not his fear
For he whimpered only once before he slept
Agile was he, like all kinds of brother deer;
Only loving and he was never unkempt
Guarding me from things that were proved harmful,
Always there, my dear beloved dog Carmal
So in my creative writing class we had to try writing sonnets; you know, the weird poems written by peeps like Shakespere. Anyway, this is my failed attempt at it. Each line is supposed to have 14 syllables, but some of mine only have 11. This poem is about the day I got my faithful little weiner dog, and saw his sister. She was already sold to someone else in town. Rest in peace, Carmal!
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oldsparr56 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Very nice picture.
moonman169 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
D'awwww they look like little Vienna sausage's :aww:
BlackAprilBlossom Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist
I love this :D
theartsydoglover Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
:iconiloveyouplz: I love this. Adorable puppies!
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